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Structural Selection
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Escalating, unsupported "closure" language across chapters

Pre-Physical Selection & Emergent RealityCh. 30 → 31 → 32 → 34 → 35

Original criticism

Successive chapters progressively harden tentative early framing ("suggests," "consistent with") into confident closure language ("establishes," "demonstrates") without any new argument or result appearing in between to justify the escalation.

Response & evidence

Logged in OVERSTRONG_LANGUAGE_LOG.md as an editorial finding — not a mathematical error, but a rhetorical pattern worth a reader's attention.